I entered my legal thriller, Monkey in the Middle, in a contest at gather.com. To read and comment or rate my first chapter (and hopefully catapult me into round 2), you must register (it’s free) here
to see my work.
It’s only up for comment for 14 days and the votes are tallied by readers’ ratings.
I’m really not telling you this to drum up votes. I want your feedback. (Really. I’m thick-skinned now. I can take it. Just ask my critique group!) Does it draw you in? Does it turn you off? Are you confused or anxious to know more? Are the characters believable? Are they likable? Do they seem real or two dimensional?
I could go on, but I won’t. Read it for yourself, if you are so inclined.
Just thought you’d like to know.